Comments on: Taerith: Chapter Eighteen

By: Emily Mae

Emily Mae — Thu, 26 Jul 2007 16:55:00 +0000

WOW! Nice one, Starr. I especially loved the part with Lilia/Mirian and Kardas/Joachim. Very VERY nicely written. Kardas is going to marry Mirian–I predict it. PLEEEEEEEEEASE tell me I’m right.
*huge, wide, innocent eyes*
‘kay, I know you won’t tell me. :) On to chapter 19!!

By: Kapezia

Kapezia — Mon, 23 Jul 2007 01:21:00 +0000

<< I'm looking forward to the more frequent Taerith updates. :-) >>

Awwww Brittany, you can't rush genius. LOL.. Taerith updates are the absolute highlight of my RSS feed moments. Another deeply satisfying chapter.

By: Danielle

Danielle — Sun, 22 Jul 2007 12:24:00 +0000

Wow.

I am not one to be lavish in my praise, but this is a really amazing story. I printed it out and read it this weekend and now… I want more!!!!!!

By: Michelle

Michelle — Sat, 21 Jul 2007 18:02:00 +0000

Lovely. This chapter, and the last one, really flowed. As a writer, I love when you sit down with the story in your head, and the words just come from your mind onto the page. It felt like that was what was happening, especially the last chapter. I can’t even comment on the characters as individuals, they are all so wonderful in these chapters. Huzzah!

By: Libby Russell

Libby Russell — Thu, 19 Jul 2007 19:48:00 +0000

I knew Kardas couldn't go through with it... though I wondered how you'd do it since he seemed fully capable and willing. Joachim suggests that Kardas, like Mirian, has some claim to the throne, am I right?

Borden's depth seems to be less ... deep. I guess you're st not going into his inner-workings as much, and it's partially disappointing me, but partially making the pain of his evil easier to bear. I'm liking him less, therefor I care less if he goes bad. But still, that glimmer of something that was in him must be in there somewhere.

Lilia and Mirian give me warm fuzzies. I find it interesting that they are both in kinds of bondage, and with each other they each find a freedom unique to thier needs. But I'm seeing potential for hurt since it's obvious they both care deeply for Taerith.

I'm so glad you're writing more often. I hope you can wrap this up by summer's end so I can finish reading it before school starts again.

Well, it was lovelyful and I'm excited for more. I'm glad you have wireless in your room. This is fun.

<3Libby

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Thu, 19 Jul 2007 02:25:00 +0000

FANtabulous!

Anonymous =)

By: Brittany Simmons

Brittany Simmons — Wed, 18 Jul 2007 21:05:00 +0000

So much for having trouble writing, girl. Every time I read a new chapter, every time, it seems to me better in some way than the last. I have all these little fragmented feelings and reactions dancing around in my brain, but it’s too hard to squeeze them into words.

I’m looking forward to the more frequent Taerith updates. :-)

By: Gabi

Gabi — Wed, 18 Jul 2007 16:10:00 +0000

Alrighty, now that I've read it. I loved everything that you wrote with Lilia and Mirian- it was so beautiful and heart wrenching. The effect of the lull before the storm was perfectly accomplished through it. The set up for what is going to occur was stunning, almost like we're taking one final hurried breath before plunging headfirst into the climax.

Great Chapter- really wonderful.

Although somebody ought to smack Borden over the head with a very big stick.

By: Gabi

Gabi — Wed, 18 Jul 2007 16:01:00 +0000

AHA! I love this! I posted my comment on chapter 17, only to hit enter and find chapter 18 posted! Its like magic! or something… Hmm… maybe I should tell people to ‘get writing’ more often.

Anywoot- on to read it!