Comments on: Taerith: Chapter Twelve http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/ Tue, 27 Jul 2010 21:39:29 -0600 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Rachel Rossano http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/comment-page-1/#comment-377 Rachel Rossano Thu, 24 May 2007 21:05:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/#comment-377 Oooh! The stage is set, the plot afoot, only time will show the outcome. :) And you talk of it being slow. I don't think so. :) On to the next chapter. :) Oooh! The stage is set, the plot afoot, only time will show the outcome. :) And you talk of it being slow. I don’t think so. :) On to the next chapter. :)

]]> By: kappa http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/comment-page-1/#comment-341 kappa Wed, 18 Apr 2007 06:03:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/#comment-341 I like this sentence: <br/><br/><< His voice was deep, solemn like a funeral bell. >><br/><br/>Your writing is sooo metaphoric and descriptive. It's beautiful. I like this sentence:

< < His voice was deep, solemn like a funeral bell. >>

Your writing is sooo metaphoric and descriptive. It’s beautiful.

]]> By: Brittany Simmons http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/comment-page-1/#comment-340 Brittany Simmons Tue, 17 Apr 2007 17:56:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/#comment-340 I love Taerith. Taerith the man and Taerith the story. This chapter was incredible! I love the way you painted each scene of it. And Mirian. . . I love her. She's taken me awhile to warm up to, perhaps because at heart I am much more like Lilia. But in that last scene of her, with her remembering her mother's death with tears in her eyes, I knew I loved that so strong yet still weak and lovable girl and that she has won my permanant affection.<br/><br/> I love Taerith's poetic answers to everything too, like his referrence to his siblings and his answers in his conversation with Joachim. Taerith is so awesome. I love that man. Now why do I have deja vu over that sentence?<br/><br/> And I knew Lilia was pregnant. Although that was meant to obvious, I think.<br/><br/> Everybody's been posting more often of late. We should have spring breaks more often. ;-) I love Taerith. Taerith the man and Taerith the story. This chapter was incredible! I love the way you painted each scene of it. And Mirian. . . I love her. She’s taken me awhile to warm up to, perhaps because at heart I am much more like Lilia. But in that last scene of her, with her remembering her mother’s death with tears in her eyes, I knew I loved that so strong yet still weak and lovable girl and that she has won my permanant affection.

I love Taerith’s poetic answers to everything too, like his referrence to his siblings and his answers in his conversation with Joachim. Taerith is so awesome. I love that man. Now why do I have deja vu over that sentence?

And I knew Lilia was pregnant. Although that was meant to obvious, I think.

Everybody’s been posting more often of late. We should have spring breaks more often. ;-)

]]> By: Libby Russell http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/comment-page-1/#comment-339 Libby Russell Tue, 17 Apr 2007 17:33:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/#comment-339 I saw you posted and I couldn't wait--I had to read RIGHT THEN. Very nice. Very, very nice. Britt was sitting next to me waiting for her turn to read and laughing at my "sound affects," as she calls them. Lot's of "oh, no!"s and "Eeep!"s. I like how frustrated your story makes me. It's a good story when one is frustrated by it--that's what I say. <br/><br/>Anyway. Lilia and Mirian's scene was beautiful. I love the continuing development of their bond. Lilia seems to influence Mirian without trying; something about her wounds Mirian. I can see they are meant to be friends.<br/><br/>And lastly, the atmosphere: how perfectly dreary. You know how to set the mood. <br/><br/>Excellent work! Please post more SOON!<br/><br/><3Libby I saw you posted and I couldn’t wait–I had to read RIGHT THEN. Very nice. Very, very nice. Britt was sitting next to me waiting for her turn to read and laughing at my “sound affects,” as she calls them. Lot’s of “oh, no!”s and “Eeep!”s. I like how frustrated your story makes me. It’s a good story when one is frustrated by it–that’s what I say.

Anyway. Lilia and Mirian’s scene was beautiful. I love the continuing development of their bond. Lilia seems to influence Mirian without trying; something about her wounds Mirian. I can see they are meant to be friends.

And lastly, the atmosphere: how perfectly dreary. You know how to set the mood.

Excellent work! Please post more SOON!

<3Libby

]]> By: Kirk http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/comment-page-1/#comment-338 Kirk Tue, 17 Apr 2007 00:59:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/#comment-338 I am very worried now! What will happen to all those different people? I don't know how long I can wait to see what happens next! I am very worried now! What will happen to all those different people? I don’t know how long I can wait to see what happens next!

]]> By: Emily Mae http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/comment-page-1/#comment-337 Emily Mae Mon, 16 Apr 2007 17:06:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/#comment-337 ps - I loved the line about Taerith's heart being scattered all over. That was so sweet! ;) ps – I loved the line about Taerith’s heart being scattered all over. That was so sweet! ;)

]]> By: Emily Mae http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/comment-page-1/#comment-336 Emily Mae Mon, 16 Apr 2007 17:03:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/273/#comment-336 THAT'S IT???? You'd BETTER have another chapter up by the end of the week or ELSE! OY, you can't just leave us hanging. *rolls eyes* Seriously, Starr.<br/><br/>I like it. It seemed a little rough in areas (not sure of exact examples, though, sorry). I think that will be cured merely by editing on draft 2. Nothing was seriously wrong. I still like Kardas a lot. You must write more with him. :-D He's Sa-weeeeet!<br/><br/>love lots,<br/>Me!!! THAT’S IT???? You’d BETTER have another chapter up by the end of the week or ELSE! OY, you can’t just leave us hanging. *rolls eyes* Seriously, Starr.

I like it. It seemed a little rough in areas (not sure of exact examples, though, sorry). I think that will be cured merely by editing on draft 2. Nothing was seriously wrong. I still like Kardas a lot. You must write more with him. :-D He’s Sa-weeeeet!

love lots,
Me!!!

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