Comments on: Taerith: Chapter Eleven http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/ Wed, 25 Jan 2012 17:24:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: Rachel Rossano http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/comment-page-1/#comment-376 Rachel Rossano Thu, 24 May 2007 20:45:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/#comment-376 Well done yet again. I am sorry that this is so long in coming, but I am trying to catch up now. :) On to the next chapter. :) Well done yet again. I am sorry that this is so long in coming, but I am trying to catch up now. :) On to the next chapter. :)

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/comment-page-1/#comment-373 Anonymous Wed, 23 May 2007 01:24:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/#comment-373 I can't wait to read Taerith! I've read Aquila, Ilara, Aiden, and Arnan, and Zoe so far (or at least half of each! :) and I amexcited to read about another Romany! :)<br/>:D<br/>~a faithful Romany reader I can’t wait to read Taerith! I’ve read Aquila, Ilara, Aiden, and Arnan, and Zoe so far (or at least half of each! :) and I amexcited to read about another Romany! :)
:D
~a faithful Romany reader

]]> By: Libby Russell http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/comment-page-1/#comment-335 Libby Russell Wed, 11 Apr 2007 20:50:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/#comment-335 Well, you’ve gone and outdone yourself again. I was reading this rather rushedly a few hours ago, while I was waiting for my ride to the airport. (I am currently 30,000 ft. above sea level on my way to Phoenix and then on to Tucson, writing this to paste as a comment later.) Anyway, here are my thoughts:<br/><br/>Taerith… Taerith! I love that guy. I share Britt’s sentiments on that point. The way he sees everyone around him and cares for them ahead of himself; he’s definitely an older sibling. I’m glad you’ve done more character-development, because it has given me opportunity to make sure I had Taerith’s personality down. He’s the compassionate sort.<br/><br/>Joachim’s role is intriguing. I can’t really read him. If it weren’t for my presuppositions about his role as a believer, I would be less sure he isn’t a villain. Was his aura supposed to be slightly sinister, or was that just me? lol<br/><br/>Lilia showed a bit more assertiveness in this chapter, which surprised me due to her worsened health. I guess Mirian’s domineering presence is getting less intimidating for her.<br/><br/>And Hosten—I hate that guy.<br/><br/>*turbulence* Wow, just about lost my lunch. I’m going to save this now and post it when I can! <br/><br/>Love ya, Starr! Great chapter!<br/><br/>P.S. Posting from Phoenix-- how I love free Wi-Fi! Well, you’ve gone and outdone yourself again. I was reading this rather rushedly a few hours ago, while I was waiting for my ride to the airport. (I am currently 30,000 ft. above sea level on my way to Phoenix and then on to Tucson, writing this to paste as a comment later.) Anyway, here are my thoughts:

Taerith… Taerith! I love that guy. I share Britt’s sentiments on that point. The way he sees everyone around him and cares for them ahead of himself; he’s definitely an older sibling. I’m glad you’ve done more character-development, because it has given me opportunity to make sure I had Taerith’s personality down. He’s the compassionate sort.

Joachim’s role is intriguing. I can’t really read him. If it weren’t for my presuppositions about his role as a believer, I would be less sure he isn’t a villain. Was his aura supposed to be slightly sinister, or was that just me? lol

Lilia showed a bit more assertiveness in this chapter, which surprised me due to her worsened health. I guess Mirian’s domineering presence is getting less intimidating for her.

And Hosten—I hate that guy.

*turbulence* Wow, just about lost my lunch. I’m going to save this now and post it when I can!

Love ya, Starr! Great chapter!

P.S. Posting from Phoenix– how I love free Wi-Fi!

]]> By: Katie Simmons http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/comment-page-1/#comment-332 Katie Simmons Mon, 09 Apr 2007 16:43:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/#comment-332 Yay! Taerith is so cool. I canno wait for more. -Katie Yay! Taerith is so cool. I canno wait for more. -Katie

]]> By: Emily Mae http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/comment-page-1/#comment-329 Emily Mae Sun, 08 Apr 2007 03:03:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/#comment-329 LOL - Brittany makes me LAUGH!!!!! ;)<br/>Great chap, Starr. I highly enjoyed it. The kid whom Taerith took the food from was a great character and I WANT TO SEE MORE OF HIM! Mirian and Lilia both were great in this chapter...though Lilia is continually so weak it's hard for me to empathize with her. STill, she and Mirian are good foils for each other. I did very much like the section with Lilia recieving the book, too. Very nicely written. Loving it! ;) LOL – Brittany makes me LAUGH!!!!! ;)
Great chap, Starr. I highly enjoyed it. The kid whom Taerith took the food from was a great character and I WANT TO SEE MORE OF HIM! Mirian and Lilia both were great in this chapter…though Lilia is continually so weak it’s hard for me to empathize with her. STill, she and Mirian are good foils for each other. I did very much like the section with Lilia recieving the book, too. Very nicely written. Loving it! ;)

]]> By: Brittany Simmons http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/comment-page-1/#comment-328 Brittany Simmons Sun, 08 Apr 2007 02:01:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/#comment-328 Since you live for comments and I'd prefer you to keep living. . . ;-) <br/><br/> This was another excellent chapter. I think things are moving along quite well.<br/> It was funny in the beginning, because I keep picturing Emmet as a sweet guy. The reason being, that I connect that name to a darling little boy from a book I read once so my mind thinks all Emmets must be adorable little deaf boys. Apparently this one is not. :-P<br/> I liked the boy they stole the chicken from. A nice, plucky young fellow. I hope you bring him up in the story again sometime.<br/> I'm liking Mirian and Lilia more, too. They are being revealed more in each chapter. And Taerith I love. :-) It's funny, but I was thinking about him a couple days ago and what a sweet, gentle, lovable guy he is. I've never had a crush on a fictional character before in earnest, but this is the closest I've come!! Taerith is just so nice! I want to marry that fellow. Perhaps that is because my inner weaknesses seem to be similar to Lilia's and I wish I had a strong, compassionate man to keep a watch out for me and protect me. I'm going to abandon my dignity and be all gushy over him. He's so lovable! I'd like to read more sections from his perspective.<br/> Can't wait for more! Since you live for comments and I’d prefer you to keep living. . . ;-)

This was another excellent chapter. I think things are moving along quite well.
It was funny in the beginning, because I keep picturing Emmet as a sweet guy. The reason being, that I connect that name to a darling little boy from a book I read once so my mind thinks all Emmets must be adorable little deaf boys. Apparently this one is not. :-P
I liked the boy they stole the chicken from. A nice, plucky young fellow. I hope you bring him up in the story again sometime.
I’m liking Mirian and Lilia more, too. They are being revealed more in each chapter. And Taerith I love. :-) It’s funny, but I was thinking about him a couple days ago and what a sweet, gentle, lovable guy he is. I’ve never had a crush on a fictional character before in earnest, but this is the closest I’ve come!! Taerith is just so nice! I want to marry that fellow. Perhaps that is because my inner weaknesses seem to be similar to Lilia’s and I wish I had a strong, compassionate man to keep a watch out for me and protect me. I’m going to abandon my dignity and be all gushy over him. He’s so lovable! I’d like to read more sections from his perspective.
Can’t wait for more!

]]> By: Rachel Brewer http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/comment-page-1/#comment-327 Rachel Brewer Sat, 07 Apr 2007 23:23:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/04/272/#comment-327 I an loving this story!!! I really want to know more about Kardas though, he seems cool. Excellent chapter! I just read chapter 10 too, and loved it as well. I an loving this story!!! I really want to know more about Kardas though, he seems cool. Excellent chapter! I just read chapter 10 too, and loved it as well.

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