Comments on: Taerith: Chapter Ten http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/ Wed, 25 Jan 2012 17:24:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: Gabi http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/comment-page-1/#comment-346 Gabi Thu, 19 Apr 2007 20:00:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/#comment-346 oops... I was reading chapter nine and commenting on chapter ten. Must be lacking in that whole hand-eye coordination thing. No wonder I wasn't understanding everyone elses' comments... oops… I was reading chapter nine and commenting on chapter ten. Must be lacking in that whole hand-eye coordination thing. No wonder I wasn’t understanding everyone elses’ comments…

]]> By: Gabi http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/comment-page-1/#comment-345 Gabi Thu, 19 Apr 2007 19:54:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/#comment-345 It appears that I am woefully behind on my commenting. While, I mean, I knew I was behind - just not this far behind.<br/><br/>Moving on...<br/><br/>I love the rich tapestry of tension that you've woven between the various characters of the castle- and I especially love the way Taerith appears like a soft breath of pastel color in it all. If that makes any sense. I've always felt that way- this chapter is simply extremely pronounced in its tensions and reliefs. (Great job on the exchanges between Mirian and Lilia, and Mirian and Mistress Grey, by the way)... It appears that I am woefully behind on my commenting. While, I mean, I knew I was behind – just not this far behind.

Moving on…

I love the rich tapestry of tension that you’ve woven between the various characters of the castle- and I especially love the way Taerith appears like a soft breath of pastel color in it all. If that makes any sense. I’ve always felt that way- this chapter is simply extremely pronounced in its tensions and reliefs. (Great job on the exchanges between Mirian and Lilia, and Mirian and Mistress Grey, by the way)…

]]> By: Libby Russell http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/comment-page-1/#comment-333 Libby Russell Mon, 09 Apr 2007 17:31:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/#comment-333 Well done! <br/><br/>Borden... Borden. That horrible meany-head! I love him still, even though you have done your best to make him seem like a total jerk. I think I could hold out hope for him, though; he could be one of those characters who seems throughout the story to be driven by bad motives and evilness, but in the end a new light is shed on him and he's not <i>wholly</i> bad.<br/><br/>I've got to catch up and read ch. 11!<br/><br/><3Libby<br/><br/>P.S. It was nice to see my drawing up. :-) Well done!

Borden… Borden. That horrible meany-head! I love him still, even though you have done your best to make him seem like a total jerk. I think I could hold out hope for him, though; he could be one of those characters who seems throughout the story to be driven by bad motives and evilness, but in the end a new light is shed on him and he’s not wholly bad.

I’ve got to catch up and read ch. 11!

<3Libby

P.S. It was nice to see my drawing up. :-)

]]> By: Rachel Rossano http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/comment-page-1/#comment-325 Rachel Rossano Thu, 29 Mar 2007 22:00:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/#comment-325 *clicks tongue* Borden should know better. :(<br/><br/>Excellent job! :) I liked the exchange between Miriam and Taerith. It was nicely done. :) I am eager to see what will happen with Kardas and the men on the hunt. Is he to die? Or is Hosten? *clicks tongue* Borden should know better. :(

Excellent job! :) I liked the exchange between Miriam and Taerith. It was nicely done. :) I am eager to see what will happen with Kardas and the men on the hunt. Is he to die? Or is Hosten?

]]> By: Michelle http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/comment-page-1/#comment-324 Michelle Wed, 28 Mar 2007 16:37:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/#comment-324 hmm. What do I think? I think this chapter was a good transition, but you can't have too many transitions before losing your readers' interest. One thing is: you might want to put more detail into your chapters. This one seemed a little short. Some more description would be a nice touch. <br/>The kitchen scene was well done. <br/>I'm not trying to sound negative: Taerith is one of my favorites. Keep up the good work and keep me guessing for the conclusions. hmm. What do I think? I think this chapter was a good transition, but you can’t have too many transitions before losing your readers’ interest. One thing is: you might want to put more detail into your chapters. This one seemed a little short. Some more description would be a nice touch.
The kitchen scene was well done.
I’m not trying to sound negative: Taerith is one of my favorites. Keep up the good work and keep me guessing for the conclusions.

]]> By: Emily Mae http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/comment-page-1/#comment-323 Emily Mae Wed, 28 Mar 2007 11:05:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/03/270/#comment-323 YESSSSSSSs!!! A new chapter! Awesome job, Starr. I love it. Taerith's story/plight is becoming much more interesting with the extreme food shortage and Lilia's fragile position.<br/><br/>I LOVED the part where Mirian and Taerith were talking and he told her to be Lilia's friend. It was good. Of course, telling her that she wasn't strong enough to do become her friend was probably in the end what got Mirian to stubbornly decide to become her friend--if only to spite Taerith. *grin* It reminded me so much of Zoe...hehehe. Stubborn characters are always so much fun.<br/><br/>Looking forward to more. A hunt! Cool. Also, what happened to the New Path or whoever those evil priest dudes were? I'm quite curious about them....<br/><br/>:) Love ya. YESSSSSSSs!!! A new chapter! Awesome job, Starr. I love it. Taerith’s story/plight is becoming much more interesting with the extreme food shortage and Lilia’s fragile position.

I LOVED the part where Mirian and Taerith were talking and he told her to be Lilia’s friend. It was good. Of course, telling her that she wasn’t strong enough to do become her friend was probably in the end what got Mirian to stubbornly decide to become her friend–if only to spite Taerith. *grin* It reminded me so much of Zoe…hehehe. Stubborn characters are always so much fun.

Looking forward to more. A hunt! Cool. Also, what happened to the New Path or whoever those evil priest dudes were? I’m quite curious about them….

:) Love ya.

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