Comments on: Taerith: Chapter Seven http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/ Wed, 25 Jan 2012 17:24:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: Rachel Rossano http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-308 Rachel Rossano Tue, 06 Feb 2007 17:59:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-308 I feel for Lilia. :) I really enjoyed the play of personalities and expectations in this chapter. The interaction between Lilia and Miriam was intreguing and I am looking forward to seeing how thier relationship develops. :) It sounds as though you have much to work with in the meantime. :) I am eager to see what happens. I feel for Lilia. :) I really enjoyed the play of personalities and expectations in this chapter. The interaction between Lilia and Miriam was intreguing and I am looking forward to seeing how thier relationship develops. :) It sounds as though you have much to work with in the meantime. :) I am eager to see what happens.

]]> By: Gabi http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-305 Gabi Mon, 22 Jan 2007 22:46:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-305 Beautiful, beautiful chapter. I dearly love the way you are weaving this story and all the characters within it. I might be tempted to make a comment about how you should post another chapter but that might be slightly hypocritical of me ;-) Beautiful, beautiful chapter. I dearly love the way you are weaving this story and all the characters within it. I might be tempted to make a comment about how you should post another chapter but that might be slightly hypocritical of me ;-)

]]> By: Marsha http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-304 Marsha Wed, 17 Jan 2007 07:08:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-304 Yet another intriguing chapter. I hope you write more REALLY soon!!! Yet another intriguing chapter. I hope you write more REALLY soon!!!

]]> By: Nathan M. http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-301 Nathan M. Thu, 11 Jan 2007 02:46:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-301 Hey this is really cool you are doing this. <br/><br/>How old are you if you dont mind me asking?<br/><br/>P.S. I am the one you sent a message to on xanga (bobsagget1990) Hey this is really cool you are doing this.

How old are you if you dont mind me asking?

P.S. I am the one you sent a message to on xanga (bobsagget1990)

]]> By: The Romany Epistles http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-300 The Romany Epistles Thu, 11 Jan 2007 00:27:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-300 Unsatisfyingly short! That is a compliment, mind you. I second Carolyn in saying your character development is very smooth and progressing enough to make each character intriguing even as they are more and more revealed. I love the tragicality of Mirian and Lilia's lives, each in their own way. I love their contrast and I'm looking forward to how their relationship pans out. Borden is obviously interested in Mirian. <i>I'm</i> interested in Borden! I love Taerith most of all of course, but Borden is fascinating and I can't help but like him. Please don't make him kill somebody or do some other such wicked thing! He can't be the villain!<br/><br/>I noticed you used "wheedle," lol! <br/><br/>Great chapter! I'm anxious for more!<br/><br/><3Libby Unsatisfyingly short! That is a compliment, mind you. I second Carolyn in saying your character development is very smooth and progressing enough to make each character intriguing even as they are more and more revealed. I love the tragicality of Mirian and Lilia’s lives, each in their own way. I love their contrast and I’m looking forward to how their relationship pans out. Borden is obviously interested in Mirian. I’m interested in Borden! I love Taerith most of all of course, but Borden is fascinating and I can’t help but like him. Please don’t make him kill somebody or do some other such wicked thing! He can’t be the villain!

I noticed you used “wheedle,” lol!

Great chapter! I’m anxious for more!

<3Libby

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-299 Anonymous Tue, 09 Jan 2007 03:18:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-299 I love this story! Write more soon! I love this story! Write more soon!

]]> By: The Romany Epistles http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-298 The Romany Epistles Sat, 06 Jan 2007 21:23:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-298 MIRIAN, MY MIRIAN, JUST HOLD ON!!! It will get better...I hope...someday...for you. *sigh* I did feel twinges of pity for Lilia, but Mirian is right: the queen should be strong to lead the people. Mirian is wishing she could be in control instead of the weak-willed queen--for that is how she seems to percieve Lilia. I believe Lilia has strength, but of a different kind. It will be interesting to see how this all plays out, especially with Lilia's obvious attraction to Taerith with she's married to Annar... Hmm.<br/><br/>Love and hugs,<br/>Em MIRIAN, MY MIRIAN, JUST HOLD ON!!! It will get better…I hope…someday…for you. *sigh* I did feel twinges of pity for Lilia, but Mirian is right: the queen should be strong to lead the people. Mirian is wishing she could be in control instead of the weak-willed queen–for that is how she seems to percieve Lilia. I believe Lilia has strength, but of a different kind. It will be interesting to see how this all plays out, especially with Lilia’s obvious attraction to Taerith with she’s married to Annar… Hmm.

Love and hugs,
Em

]]> By: The Romany Epistles http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-297 The Romany Epistles Fri, 05 Jan 2007 22:15:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-297 Lovely, Starr! I delight in the way you thread words together. :-)<br/><br/>~Brittany Lovely, Starr! I delight in the way you thread words together. :-)

~Brittany

]]> By: Courtney http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-296 Courtney Fri, 05 Jan 2007 17:27:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-296 I'm so Happy you wrote! I'm in love with this story.. can't wait to see what happens next! I’m so Happy you wrote! I’m in love with this story.. can’t wait to see what happens next!

]]> By: Carolyn http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/comment-page-1/#comment-295 Carolyn Fri, 05 Jan 2007 13:36:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2007/01/267/#comment-295 Poor Lilia. All this isn't exactly fair on her. Very good job though. I enjoy the development of characters with each subsequent chapter and I'm very proud of you for getting another one down. :) Poor Lilia. All this isn’t exactly fair on her. Very good job though. I enjoy the development of characters with each subsequent chapter and I’m very proud of you for getting another one down. :)

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