Comments on: Taerith: Chapter Six

By: kappa

kappa — Mon, 09 Apr 2007 08:32:00 +0000

the characters you paint are beyond ‘likeable’. they’re real.

By: The Romany Epistles

The Romany Epistles — Tue, 19 Dec 2006 02:12:00 +0000

Sigh, I like Taerith…If only there were more like him in the world. I love your story so far, it’s believable and your characters are so real.

Write more soon!
Rachel B

By: Marsha

Marsha — Tue, 12 Dec 2006 16:40:00 +0000

I can’t wait for the next chapter!!! GREAT job!

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Tue, 12 Dec 2006 15:38:00 +0000

please write more soon! i’m excited to know what happens next!

By: Rachel Ro.

Rachel Ro. — Fri, 01 Dec 2006 04:45:00 +0000

Beautiful! I do like the tree and you hinted rather clearly at what its significance might be. I enjoyed the buird experience and loved the interaction between the characters. As always, I am looking forward to more. :)

By: Libby

Libby — Tue, 28 Nov 2006 04:35:00 +0000

I kept getting reminded of the great Charles Dickens as I read chapters five and six. Obviously this is a good thing. :-)

I love your way with words. I sit at my laptop writing and think, would F.L. edit this or leave it as it is? ;-) You're my guiding Starr. (shameful punnery, that)

Your characters are so deep! I'm really enjoying getting to know them. I reiterate from a past comment that Borden is fascinating; I want to know much more about him.

You said on Wayside that you included themes in your summary-- I think I'm seeing some of them. That seems like a good idea, really. I'll have to think about that.

Thanks for the excellent chapter, you keep me longing for more and wondering what on earth is going to happen!

<3Libby/Ilara

By: Gabi

Gabi — Sat, 25 Nov 2006 22:46:00 +0000

I loved the tree, and I especially loved what you did with the dove. It was very real and touching.

So Chapter 7? ;-)

By: The Romany Epistles

The Romany Epistles — Sat, 25 Nov 2006 15:40:00 +0000

*grin*

Wow, awesome section, Starr! I loved the parts with Mirian, know you’re suprised. And that part with the huge bird/Deus was AMAZING! You really brought in the spiritual side of things really well – as you always do. ;) Taerith certainly IS choosing the hard road here…he’s definitely attracted to Lilia, but he’s staying to protect her. Dangerous….but bound to be an interesting tale. :)

Can’t wait for more….as usual. ;)
Em/Zoe