Comments on: Taerith: Chapter Four http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/ Wed, 25 Jan 2012 17:24:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: Micaiah Thomson http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-17930 Micaiah Thomson Wed, 22 Dec 2010 17:17:10 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-17930 Lillia got MARRIED!?!? I wanted her to end up with Taerith! Lillia got MARRIED!?!? I wanted her to end up with Taerith!

]]> By: The Romany Epistles http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-283 The Romany Epistles Fri, 17 Nov 2006 22:48:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-283 I loved this chapter :) I loved this chapter :)

]]> By: The Romany Epistles http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-278 The Romany Epistles Mon, 06 Nov 2006 19:43:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-278 Beautiful, Rachel, very beautiful. *sigh* Why do chapters always have to end? :-)<br/><br/><br/>I really enjoyed the whole exchange with the unicorn and the way you tied all the characters in. It was rather Brilliant of you!<br/><br/>~Gabi/Arnan Beautiful, Rachel, very beautiful. *sigh* Why do chapters always have to end? :-)

I really enjoyed the whole exchange with the unicorn and the way you tied all the characters in. It was rather Brilliant of you!

~Gabi/Arnan

]]> By: Marsha http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-276 Marsha Fri, 13 Oct 2006 08:10:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-276 Wow, I really enjoyed your description of the wedding...especially the adolescent cranes. Very well done!<br/><br/>*sigh* And I am SO glad that you wrote a lengthy chapter...although it still makes me want to read more...right now!<br/><br/>I was not expecting the unicorn. It adds a new dimension to the story and opens the door to greater creative license. Very cool! Wow, I really enjoyed your description of the wedding…especially the adolescent cranes. Very well done!

*sigh* And I am SO glad that you wrote a lengthy chapter…although it still makes me want to read more…right now!

I was not expecting the unicorn. It adds a new dimension to the story and opens the door to greater creative license. Very cool!

]]> By: The Romany Epistles http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-275 The Romany Epistles Wed, 11 Oct 2006 22:33:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-275 WOW! Fearless, you've done it again. And you wrote that in the late hours of the night? You've got super-powers. <br/><br/>Seriously, I loved this chapter! It was nice and long, too! Satisfying, yet leaving room for anticipation. <br/><br/>You wanted to know my predictions? Lillia and Taerith, Mirian and Borden. There you go. I know Lillia's already married and all that, but you've gt lots more story to tell and I think Kingy is not going to last very long. <br/><br/>Great unicorn scene! I think it is adding to the feel of our little world. Mythical creatures are rare but real.<br/><br/>I'm so enjoying both the reading and writing of this project. You've gotten me in the mood to update Ilara... *sigh* if only Clarabelle weren't invading my brain right now. Alas, you probably understand how that goes.<br/><br/>Thanks for the latest installment! Looking forward to more!<br/><br/><3Libby WOW! Fearless, you’ve done it again. And you wrote that in the late hours of the night? You’ve got super-powers.

Seriously, I loved this chapter! It was nice and long, too! Satisfying, yet leaving room for anticipation.

You wanted to know my predictions? Lillia and Taerith, Mirian and Borden. There you go. I know Lillia’s already married and all that, but you’ve gt lots more story to tell and I think Kingy is not going to last very long.

Great unicorn scene! I think it is adding to the feel of our little world. Mythical creatures are rare but real.

I’m so enjoying both the reading and writing of this project. You’ve gotten me in the mood to update Ilara… *sigh* if only Clarabelle weren’t invading my brain right now. Alas, you probably understand how that goes.

Thanks for the latest installment! Looking forward to more!

<3Libby

]]> By: Rachel Rossano http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-273 Rachel Rossano Tue, 10 Oct 2006 19:34:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-273 Bravo!!!! :) I am very eager for more. I loved the interplay between the characters and the obvious shifting of control from one to the other in the scene with the unicorn. :) Bravo!!!! :) I am very eager for more. I loved the interplay between the characters and the obvious shifting of control from one to the other in the scene with the unicorn. :)

]]> By: Laynie http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-272 Laynie Mon, 09 Oct 2006 21:23:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-272 I enjoyed that immensely. Very well done. I'm quite intrigued by the story and am looking forward to more. :) I enjoyed that immensely. Very well done. I’m quite intrigued by the story and am looking forward to more. :)

]]> By: The Romany Epistles http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/comment-page-1/#comment-271 The Romany Epistles Mon, 09 Oct 2006 17:08:00 +0000 http://www.rachelstarrthomson.com/2006/10/264/#comment-271 Nice, Starr. Very nice. You incorporated all four "main" character very well. Yes, yes, Borden has his good points, but I still say that Mirian and Taerith must be together. It's only right! PLLEEEEZE????? :) LOL, I know, you aren't going to say how it will turn out until we read it at the end. Oh well, I can wait. :)<br/><br/>Very good job with Lilia's emotions before the wedding. I felt very much like you captured her mixed fear and apprehension extremely well.<br/><br/>Oh and the unicorn is AMAZING!!!!! What a cool part! Mirian to the rescue, hurrah! ;)<br/><br/>Love lots,<br/>Em Nice, Starr. Very nice. You incorporated all four “main” character very well. Yes, yes, Borden has his good points, but I still say that Mirian and Taerith must be together. It’s only right! PLLEEEEZE????? :) LOL, I know, you aren’t going to say how it will turn out until we read it at the end. Oh well, I can wait. :)

Very good job with Lilia’s emotions before the wedding. I felt very much like you captured her mixed fear and apprehension extremely well.

Oh and the unicorn is AMAZING!!!!! What a cool part! Mirian to the rescue, hurrah! ;)

Love lots,
Em

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